Need investor for buy a massage clinic

topic posted Wed, August 30, 2006 - 7:11 PM by  whiteangel
if you are interested call 310 9021429 or send me bach with Tribemail

thank you
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whiteangel
Los Angeles
  • Re: Need investor for buy a massage clinic

    Thu, August 31, 2006 - 1:51 PM

    If I may be so bold to point out, using grammatically correct English is probably the first step to receiving a call.

    And, here's a good example of what not to do, also.

    If you'd like to reach out for some money, you have to give the investor some reason to invest. Just saying a 'massage clinic' is surely not enough to encourage anyone to even give you a call showing interest in your proposal.

    Give them some reason to want to invest. Is it in a good location? Is the staff the best in that location? Is the business currently making money? Why invest?

    Thank you.

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