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Re: Need investor for buy a massage clinic
Thu, August 31, 2006 - 1:51 PM
If I may be so bold to point out, using grammatically correct English is probably the first step to receiving a call.
And, here's a good example of what not to do, also.
If you'd like to reach out for some money, you have to give the investor some reason to invest. Just saying a 'massage clinic' is surely not enough to encourage anyone to even give you a call showing interest in your proposal.
Give them some reason to want to invest. Is it in a good location? Is the staff the best in that location? Is the business currently making money? Why invest?
Thank you.